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Says there is no update file. My version says 0.0.1 and when I search update it says none to be found. I uninstalled thinking I had to do a hard install and it still is showing me "No compatible files found", so now I can't even play the original upload.

I didn't upload it as an update but as a new game. because old save files don't work

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Yes, but even the download area has no file, is what I am trying to tell you. Clicking the download button brings up an error stating "no compatible downloads were found".  The download button is completely dead.

Try now i think i fixed it

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New error  I've never seen before


Edit: WARNING: DO NOT CLICK THE 'VIEW DETAILS' button. It bricks the app and makes it a complete black screen. I had to back door logging out in order to fix my itch.io app because it would always log me in on a black screen from then on.

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I really don't know what happends. I remaded the zip file of the gaem to see if that helps

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Game drops a boat-load of errors when you choose start. Ignoring all of them (as in choosing ignore on the error page over and over), it does work. The dialogue seems very bland and forced, grammar errors aside. I can see potential with it, but don't rush the progression so much with the story. Even though the demo was so short I still felt it was extremely rushed. 

Allow the reader / player to get a feel for the characters and their personalities. Having the characters be like "I'm an idol with my own show." "I hire idols." "Hire me?" makes no sense. There would be a lot of deep discussion as the self-proclaimed idol feels out whether they can trust the MC who claims to be an agent.

 It also makes no sense that she would even consider working for him as she stated she had her own show and was already an idol, which means she has an agent already.

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Thanks for the feed back. Im learnong how to xode and stuff so this wa smore a demo foe me than for the public. Also shinobu is a auto-produced idol. So really she is just self-taught and has no money to do her dream on a big scale.that is why she is interested. Also englisg isn't my first language and i wrota that on a rush. I'll correct grammar 

So, Shinobu is a chika aidoru? You'll definitely want to give some background into that. Sounds good, though. Like I said, I'm definitely following the project to see where it goes as updates come out.