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A downloadable game for Windows and Linux
only content available for now are 2 scenes. im learning to do things so please help me out
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A downloadable game for Windows and Linux
only content available for now are 2 scenes. im learning to do things so please help me out
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Game drops a boat-load of errors when you choose start. Ignoring all of them (as in choosing ignore on the error page over and over), it does work. The dialogue seems very bland and forced, grammar errors aside. I can see potential with it, but don't rush the progression so much with the story. Even though the demo was so short I still felt it was extremely rushed.
Allow the reader / player to get a feel for the characters and their personalities. Having the characters be like "I'm an idol with my own show." "I hire idols." "Hire me?" makes no sense. There would be a lot of deep discussion as the self-proclaimed idol feels out whether they can trust the MC who claims to be an agent.
It also makes no sense that she would even consider working for him as she stated she had her own show and was already an idol, which means she has an agent already.
Thanks for the feed back. Im learnong how to xode and stuff so this wa smore a demo foe me than for the public. Also shinobu is a auto-produced idol. So really she is just self-taught and has no money to do her dream on a big scale.that is why she is interested. Also englisg isn't my first language and i wrota that on a rush. I'll correct grammar
So, Shinobu is a chika aidoru? You'll definitely want to give some background into that. Sounds good, though. Like I said, I'm definitely following the project to see where it goes as updates come out.